Thursday, September 2, 2010

Paragraph -Advertising-

We're brainwashed by advertising in everyday life, especially through commecials. A good example is commercials about shampoo or conditioner. It uses a lots of computer graffic and leads us to believe we can get such beautiful hair if we use it. Also most companies want to use a famous popular talent or actor. Morover, the package must be attractive to catch the customer's interest. To implement these strategies, it costs a lot. I've heard from one beautician that one Japanese comapany "Shiseido"spends a lot more money to advertise and package than on the content itself. What I want to say is, a comapany can lead us consumers the way they want. We should ask ourselves"Is this really good and essential to me?"

3 comments:

  1. Advertising - the commercials on TV - has become a part of our everyday life, and has been necessary for companies to promote their products. The only thing we could do about it, just as you said, is to ask us if we really need this thing before we buy the thing.

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  2. Hi Yuki. Nice paragraph. I noticed that you changed the abreviation for the hole expression. only have one suggestion: maybe you could change the word actor for artist in line 4, frase 4.

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  3. Yuki :D I'm Jinyoung.
    I have some sugguestion to your paragraph.
    "Also most companies want to use a famous poplaur talent and actor" - I think this sentence is not appropriate.

    and your opinion about 'cost' is not related to your topic, i think.

    But your specific examples are good :D

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