Thursday, September 2, 2010

Paragraph - Movies

Movies are one of the most popular means of entertainment of the twenty-first century. There are many reasons why movies became so popular. Movies has the ability to play everyday situations life and dramatize human feelings, creating a bond with its viewers. When a movie can stablish a bond with its audience, its chance of success increasses. For example, if a movie talks about a historical moment of our civilization, for instance, the World War II, it will probabily be interesting for those who wants to se a representation of such crucial period. Moreover, tt is an affordable art form that can be broadcast to large audiences.
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  1. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2010 at 1:20 PM

    Hi,it's Yuki.
    I noticed some points.
    In the second line:Movies has→Movies have or The movie has
    In the forth line:every day situation→everyday life (I thought you wanted to say this)
    Your paragraph is clear and understandable but it would be better if you add a conclusion.

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