Monday, September 13, 2010
The place in Japan the visitor shouldn't miss
If you want to see especially Japan of 'today', Shibuya in Tokyo must be the best place. It is always bustling with lots of fashion buildings and people until midnight. At first you'll be surprised the unique Japanese young people. You can see many fashinable girls called "Gyaru" who are dressing up and decorating too much like a doll. Besides, it's good to enjoy Japanese comics at comic cafe open 24 hours. Today Japanese anime is highly popular in the world. Most Japanese like karaoke, so you can sing at cheap Karaoke box with private singing rooms. As a souvenir, I recommend to take "purikura(print club)" at the game center. Japanese one is really develoved so your eyes printed bigger, your skin more beautiful. In addition, there are some stages performed by popular comedians with Japanese comedy talk or short comedy. As a result, Shibuya is an entertainment and energish city in Japan.
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Hi Yuki!
ReplyDeleteShibuya seems like a fun place!
Here are my suggestions:
At first you’ll be surprised -> put a comma after first
I didn’t understand the 9th sentence.
Hi Yuki
ReplyDeleteI like your coherence.
I tried to find something, but I couldn´t
Hey :D
ReplyDelete1.[Today Japanese anime is highly popular in the world. Most Japanese like karaoke,~] a conjuction (also) is needed between these two sentneces.
2. [Japanese one is ~] what is the meaning of japanese one? Does it mean japanese people? then I think "Japnaese are~" is much better :D
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