Monday, September 13, 2010
A Place You can’t Afford to Miss
If you go traveling in Taiwan, a must-see place is Taroko National Park. The name Taroko means "magnificent and beautiful". Teroko National Park is located in the eastnorthern part of Taiwan, and the surrounding area is famous for its supplies of marble. When you begin to explore this wonderful place, you will first pass a valley of marble and with a flowing river down below. Because of the beautiful scenery this park offers, Tarako National Park has been once nominated to be one of the world heritage sites. Walking alone the valley, you would be amazed by the force of mother nature. Besides, down below the valley flows the murmuring brook, and you will ponder how this magnificence would come out. As you immerse yourself the exploration of this valley, you will enjoy your peace of mind, taking worldly matters off your mind, and that is the spirit of the Chinese.
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Hi Martino!
ReplyDeleteI think you paragraph is really good. The only thing I noticed was the lack of transition signals in the middle of it, but I don’t know if you really need it there.
Hi Martino
ReplyDeleteHere are mi notes:
Sentences 1: You are ok, but I think would be better if you write " If you are going to travel to taiwan..."
Sentences 2: .Because of the beautiful... --> I prefer--> For the reason for his beatiful scenary....
Sentences 7: .....by the force of mother nature. Besides... I will write--> By the force of mother nature.In fact, down below .
Final sentences
"As you immerse yourself the exploration of this". I will write, If you inmerse yourself.....
See you men.
Hi martino~
ReplyDelete1.[ you will first pass a valley of marble and with a flowing river down below.]-> you will pass a valley of marble and with a flowing river down below at first.
Some words are diffult.. for example,'ponder'.. only to me??????hahahah
bye ~