Monday, September 6, 2010
There are many kinds of advertising and we can contact with it very easily. For example, there are lots of advertisements by television or other visual media. Whenever we watch TV , we can get them easily. Almost these advertisements consist of images and sound. Also wehn we read magazines or newspaper, we can see various advertisements. These are composed of only images. In addition, we can encounter advertising, when we are walking, taking a bus or subway.
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Hi,Jinyoung.It's Yuki.
ReplyDeleteI notice some points.
In the second line:Almost→Usually(I think it's better)
Also it would be better if you add the conclusion.(ex.Therefore ~~~~.)
Hi Jinyoung. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteHere are my suggestion to you:
Sentence 1:
I think you need to change the verb “contact” for another one. Or perhaps you could refrase it.
Sentence 4:
I agree with Yuki, I think “Usualy” is better than “Almost”.
Sentence 5:
You misspelled “when”.
Sentence 6:
I think it’s better if you say “… composed only by images.”
Sentence 7:
“… or the subway.”